Writing Learning Story

In Writing I have been learning to:

In Writing I have been learning to use descriptive language to describe my characters and what is happening in my story  to make my writing interesting and entertaining. I can paint a picture in my readers mind for example: I can use adjectives,adverbs,similes,metaphors,descriptive phrases and specific verbs.

An example from my writing is:
bright shiny morning, I ripped the letter open, soft hands

I have also been learning to use my knowledge of what I have learnt from my reading to help me describe and explain in my own descriptive writing. I sometimes include lots of details about to give my reader more information.

An example from my writing is:
"We have to remember the N.Z soldiers because they didn't only fight for their country but fought to save there family's" 

I group my ideas in paragraphs and I make sure they are put in order or my writing won't make sense and my reader won't understand my story.

An other activity I have been learning in writing is to write a Narrative and pretend that I am a mother and I have a son that is going to war to fight and that he got pulled out of the ballot here is an example “I have to go or else I will go to jail if i die I will always remember you and you will always remember me the day I died but if I survive I will be the luckiest person ever?

I can include an introduction for example On a bright shiny morning I heard a noise “Beep Beep” an other interesting example for an introduction is As I say “may God be with you”,  

My Next Step is to write facts about the 5ws and a conclusion to explain what my explanation is about.

Here is my evidence
Conscription Story